Friday Fictioneers – The Atelier

shoes-and-books-by-magaly-guerrero
PHOTO PROMPT © Magaly Guerrero

Sophia already had everything. The only possible gift was sensation.

“How about saudade?” The little man peered over half-moon glasses. “A Portuguese emotion – the pleasure of feeling sad. Very popular. There’s even a music that goes with it: Fado

“No,” I said. “Too much like wistfulness. Besides, I want something nobody has ever experienced before.”

The wrinkled rapturesmith retired to the dark back-shop. “I think this might suit, Sir.”

He proffered a small leather box.

Chocfulness,” he said. “The pleasure of finishing something you really enjoyed but probably shouldn’t have done, like eating a whole box of chocolates.”

 

Friday fictioneers is a weekly challenge set by Rochelle Wisoff Fields to write a 100-word story in response to a photo prompt. You can find other stories here

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76 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers – The Atelier

  1. Fado (Fatum – Fate) haven’t heard it in many years. I listened to it in Portugal, many years ago in a restaurant, didn’t know what it was, had to look it up when we came back home.

    A sadness, mixed with numerous elements. I think you just wrote a Fado.

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  2. I think we need to start a petition, Neil. The world needs a rapturesmith now… and chocolate, lots and lots of chocolate.

    I really enjoyed the mood of your story. It feels so natural and relatable, and that is not always easy to do when one is using words from different languages. You did it so well.

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  3. Bring on the rapturesmith of banoffee pie, tiramisu, homemade fudge, treacle tart, and butter-iced coffee cake. Now my mouth is watering.
    I need some rapture in my life just now. Where can I find the smith in charge?
    I’m not going to forget that word in a hurry…

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  4. “Chocfulness”….. Do you know, that’s what I’ve just done. Already slightly regretting it, but there’s nothing to regret about this piece. It’s great. I particularly love the adventures with words you’ve had in the writing of it.

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  5. Great story, great place you’ve created. I lived in Portugal a while and know Saudade, it’s a great word, great concept. I think I’d opt for cheese though, rather than chocolate. Just personal choice.

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